Kaolin Fire with GUD Issues 0 through 5

kaolin fire presents :: writing :: poetry :: Appropriation


a comment
against the rocks of my mind
spreads into waves
into words
that aren't words
that were in the comment
and a new idea dawns
rising slowly over the
of the old cityline of ideas
a winged creature
rising from the ashes of itself
to itself
through itself
and creating
a new being
gently suspended
in the air 

I am soooo fake pre-loading this image so the navigation doesn't skip while loading the over state.  I know I could use the sliding doors technique to avoid this fate, but I am too lazy.